Week 11 Objectives - Self Evaluation

First, what score do you think you deserve? Write a brief justification. Think about it, then look at my answer.

- I think I deserve 0 points. I only included 4 out of the 5 elements of a classical argument, and my research was inadequate to support my thesis.

Next, let's decide what did you do well, and what could you do better? Think about it, then look at my answers.

1) My research was good. I have many information that can be used.

2) I could have made more logical essay. actually I worked very fast. so I think it is some illogical and some attraction.  
  
Please recall the 5 parts of the classical argument. Which part of the classical argument did you use the best? Which part could be improved? Think about it, then look at my answers.

1) My introduction was good. because anyone who live in Korea have interest about SeWol ferry accident. So It must get more attentions.

2) My confirmation is very weak. Because it doesn't logical very abstract. So I need more research.

Last, what's your strategy for your next draft? Where will you focus your attention to make the second draft stronger?

- I think the best thing I can do for my essay is improve my reasons. to make more reliable reasons I need more researches and deep thinking. I saw this problem very easy but I wrote this essay it is not easy that I thought. I have to improve all of part. but especially confirmation and reputation. because I defined the media is only SNS on some parts and I defined the media is only TV on some parts. I need to topicality on media. 
1)more research! 2) think deeply 3)write essay again!