week6

At 2014.04.16 in South Korea, the ferry SeWol was sink with about 470 passengers. 294 of people was died because of this accident. It is very big and terrible accident in the world. All of people was sad and lamented. people want to know why this accident happened and who had blunder. The president of South Korea, 박근혜, said "It is down to me after all. we(government) will reform all of things about Sewol ferry accident" with tears.
However still today the doubt of this accident was not solve. why the ferry was sink, why the government evade fact finding and so on. So people was angry that the tears was lie. They blame 박근혜 on the internet, SNS and so on. September 16th in cabinet meeting, 박근혜 said " The blame is excessive so need censoring media". still today whether the rumor that government censoring media  is true or not. I think that's the very interest and important problem in South Korea. I argue that government should not censor the media.



1. Attention grabber -
I attracted the audience by explaining the SeWol ferry accident
2. Explains the topic -
I write the story that why the park's government try to censor the media.
and why I chose this topic
3. My thesis -
government should not censor the media.