week8

1. What is my thesis?
government should not censor the media

 2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis? 
I am using example of country that censored media and freedom of the press

 3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
My arguments are mostly based on logic and emotion. because that is the common sense in today and censoring media can be the tool of dictatorship and almost people do not want to censor the media. they want to talk freely with their friends even though the text about the blame to president. 

My Confirmation
   
So now I tell you reasons why I argue that government should not censor the media. 
first. the censoring media can be the fight. today as I mentioned everyone can use media and talk anything with their friends and family. They have the right to talk anything that is freedom of speech. After Internet was made, people can find any information that they want. And After SNS was made, people can communicate with very varying people. those means that people have more accessibility about anything even politics. This situation, If government try to hide some facts or censor the media, people must be angry and that become riot. for example in Iran which is censored the media, a riot arises in 2002 and 2003.

second It can be invasion of privacy.
Everyone don't want to show the messages that I talked with my friends especially that is blame. but in Korea, ridiculously the president didn't want to see or listen that people blame her So censor the media(kakao talk) and punish them who spread the rumor about SeWol ferry accident and president. If the government show some kakako talk, that is obviously invasion of privacy.

last the censoring reason is not logical.
Of course the blame other people is  not good thing  but the president promised that she reform all of things and trace the truth with tears. but until now even though the bereaved families go on hunger strike, the government didn't say a word. and in this situation, the president said "the blame is excessive so need to censor the meida" that can't be the reason.